So much depends upon…
My orange juice
So much depends upon
my orange juice,
my Simply Orange orange juice
that wakes me in the morning
with a burst of citrus.
So refreshing!
My mouthguard
So much depends upon
my mouthguard.
Without it I grit and grind
and go out of my mind
with headaches unbearable
and a jaw that is tightened
that makes me quite frightened.
Acrostic Poem
CONCRETE POEM
I AM POEMS
The Shark
I am the shark…
the terror of the sea.
I am one of the fastest and fiercest fish.
My body is wider in the middle
with pointed ends.
My teeth are sharp and up to three inches long.
I swim mainly along coasts and around reefs.
I live in tropical and subtropical seas.
I feed on fish, marine birds and dead whales.
I have a good sense of smell.
I have a special sensory system on my snout
that helps me detect my prey by the
vibrations it emits.
I can grow up to sixty-five feet long
and weigh up to twelve tons.
I am the shark…
the terror of the sea.
(Information from the book, Animals of the Ocean by Isabel Fonte)
FOUND POEM
Free Verse
This poem was inspired by a dolphin cruise I went on with my family during the summer of 2007. We loaded the Voyager II at Calabash, North Carolina. The cruise wasn’t quite what I expected it to be. I thought it would be enjoyable and we would see lots of dolphins but that didn’t happen. Instead, the boat began rocking and I began feeling sick. My husband said, “Keep your eyes on the horizon.” I think the only thing that saved me was sticking my head in the ice chest. We made it back and I can honestly say it was an adventure I would not want to take again.








Mmm…simply orange is definitely the best oj out there
Comment by cjrivers — September 16, 2008 @ 4:19 pm
I took a picture of my simply orange too!
Comment by kellybeckley — September 16, 2008 @ 11:35 pm
I like the phrase “citrus burst.” In the mouthguard poem you managed to effectively incorporate rhyme!
Comment by fryeem — September 23, 2008 @ 6:17 pm
I love the hershey kiss concrete poem, how creative! Such a tiny little poem that is so powerful. You really made me want some chocolate when reading this one. I like how it rhymes, I am a rhymer myself
Comment by looperae — September 29, 2008 @ 2:51 am
I love your I Am poem. Especially the line, I have a special sensory system on my snout that helps me detect my prey by the vibrations it emits. Your word choice really creates a vivid image in the reader’s mind and shows thoughtful planning. I also like how you describe the shark as the terror of the sea. I am sure so many animals have that interpretation of the shark.
Comment by Sarah — October 5, 2008 @ 7:51 pm
I love, love, love your toaster poem! I love how it doesn’t read like the typical acrostic poem, but instead reads like a free-verse poem. Very creative! And of course I like to kiss poem a lot, too!
Comment by kellybeckley — October 7, 2008 @ 1:38 am